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Food
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:19:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Food
Squishy yogurt on your fingers,
Spaghetti in your toes
What the heck is that I see
It’s a green pea in your nose.
A great big moustache made of milk
And pudding on your cheeks
Mouth so full of Cheerios
That you can barely speak.
Here comes the dreaded wet cloth,
I try to find your face
Beneath the goo, and mush, and stuff
You wiggle in your place
There it is, I see you now
I can’t believe my eyes.
Uncovered now from the edible mess
Your beauty is no surprise.
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Re: Food
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:22:30 AM AEST
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aww!!!! thats cute... i love it. Reminds me of myself,im a sloppy eater and im 17 LOL. Great write keep it!!!!
savedbydeath
R*J
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Re: Food
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:53:27 AM AEST
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I'm 18 now and still get food all over the place, so R*J I can sympathise... Really cute little poem, I could see it all really vividly!!! brilliant,
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Re: Food
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 04:34:50 PM AEST
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Fantastic. Kids can definitely get really messy at meal times. LOL You are great at this! Love the childrens' writes.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Food
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 04:51:26 PM AEST
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| What lovely memories this brings back. My daughter would eat anything you put in front of her, nowadays aged 17, she is a fussy eater. Well she is healthy, so I must have done something right. Loved this poem, can visualise it too. Sue x |
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Re: Food
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by FlowerGrl on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:59:24 PM AEST
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| Sounds just like me when I was a baby! :) |
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Re: Food
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by wizard on
Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 10:38:49 AM AEST
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awesome! i love it... too funny!!
wiz |
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