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Lingual Delicacies
Contributed by
silverscent
on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 05:02:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Mouth watering delicacies to
Make your convulsed stomach churn
- Lingual not literal.
In a prance of tedium
A drifting mind may
Delve into vision of
Decadent and lewd fantasies,
Whereby the iteration of
Less decent French words
Are pronounced.
Dismayed reactions of
Sickened anger
Are replied with aberrant
Bursts of rage -
Poorly cloaked embarrassment.
Persistent lack of maturity
Insisting precision
Despite opinion alterations
To suit the debate.
When tempers are settled
And the magnification glass
Removed from the vulgar ego,
Black is black and vile, sinful
Accusations are scolded.
Copyright ©
silverscent
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2006-07-04 05:02:12]
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Re: Lingual Delicacies
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 07:35:32 AM AEST
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A convoluted piece.
Figurative and obscure.
I can most relate to stanza 2…
Forced church visits always concluded in such a fashion! Hah!
But yes… there seems to be an array of anger-induced undertones.
An interesting piece, over-all.
True to its abstract theme, complete with detail end emotive expression.
Well done.
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Re: Lingual Delicacies
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by brainscol on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 01:47:35 PM AEST
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Mouth watering delicacies to
Make your convulsed stomach churn
- Lingual not literal.
just great.....i say nothing more |
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Re: Lingual Delicacies
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by Keilantra on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 10:40:18 PM AEST
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This one was rather interersting. i liked it htough. Its different form what i usuallu read here. good work.
xXx
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Re: Lingual Delicacies
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:43:57 PM AEST
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I really enjoy your style of writting...very refreshing.
Jeff |
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