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Untitled2
Contributed by
brainscol
on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 04:29:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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NOT............ very FAR
from where YOU ARE
NOT......... very NEAR
.....to the PLACE.........
where ALWAYS rains
............LYING...........
in.......... the MIDDLE
................of a ROOM
.........ssssHHH...........
......no SOUNDS.......
OUTSIDE the window
..............a FIRE.........
LIT up......................by
wild...................ROSES
my HANDS............seem
older......................AGED
.........................................I
.........................................wait
.............................................CRAVE
for someone.......................................to
TURN.
..........................................the HANDLE
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brainscol
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2006-07-04 04:29:02]
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Re: Untitled2
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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umm...... well this is very interesting. Great technique. ive never seen a poem written like this. Great write keep it up
savedbydeath
R*J
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Re: Untitled2
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by poet_in_waiting on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:26:52 AM AEST
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abstract is the correct category for sure.. i really like it though
it feel a sense of desparation almost ... i wanna see more like that ...
cheers
sean |
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