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TRAFFIC JAM
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
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air filled carbon,
sound slipped in environment,
anger rise in car,
patience running far,
one little problem,
single colour,
changed all,
red the enemy,
for all drivers,
waiting for green,
a painful journey,
green carries relief,
for all unpatient,
drivers.
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2003-02-09 12:20:00]
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Re: TRAFFIC JAM
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 08:54:37 AM AEST
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Very good,well thought of.
Great job |
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Re: TRAFFIC JAM
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by soul_je on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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| Good one my friend! Keep on the good work!! |
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Re: TRAFFIC JAM
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by ammalu on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:31:00 AM AEST
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| well narrated - realistic-problem faced by many - keep writing. |
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