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Ranting
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In love with my lust
and no one to trust
so before I bust
I have something to get off my chest
I see myself no more
than a magnificent bore
Trying to settle the score
of his own demons
Having no self esteem
Not able to dream
because it all seems
so futile
Knowing I need to lie
To think I am a good guy
Not wanting to look into the eye
of my own mind
Scared of what I will see
Scared of what I will be
Scared that I will never be free
of my own doubts
So now this will end
Because it really doesn't lend
itself to help me befriend
myself...
Copyright ©
PoeticHybrid
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2006-07-04 03:57:26]
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Re: Ranting
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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Well this is a hybrid, manificent rant.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Please don't be so hard on yourself.
There's enuff mercy and grace for us all.
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Re: Ranting
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:31:03 AM AEST
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Cool, I enjoyed reading it very much, wicked beat to it, like a heartbeat, meaning it must have heart... an essential aspect of all good poetry!
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Re: Ranting
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 04:15:20 AM AEST
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Nice rhyming techique.. Not about to dream? You must be able to as your work is very thoughtful.
Another good write!
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