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Insignificant Others
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:36:55 PM in AEST
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Oh, how you insignificant fools pester me.
You drone on and on, yet all I hear is barking.
My time is being thrown out the stained window which you crawl out of.
The thing I hate most about you is, your inability to retain a single shred of intelligence and your quick-to-judge attitudes.
Somehow or another, you'll regret it.
Copyright ©
artjunkiekyle
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2006-07-03 23:36:55]
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Re: Insignificant Others
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by poet_in_waiting on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:08:56 AM AEST
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bang on ... as i was reading it here at my desk (when i should be working) they were all arround me
i like the succinct style
hey!! read my poem "please leave" i think we're writing about similar people
cheers
sean |
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Re: Insignificant Others
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by blissful-ignorance on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 05:53:37 PM AEST
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| thats good... it reminds me of my teachers... so maybe i missed the whole point.. but they were the first people who popped into my head. anyway its a great poem. |
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Re: Insignificant Others
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by brew on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:40:53 AM AEST
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It reminds me of others, whom think they can play the part, but; All long, they are trying just to appease, and hurt.! Nice write.! Love the shortness, of: to the point words.! Thanks again for sharing.
Brew~ |
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Re: Insignificant Others
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 09:28:16 AM AEST
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Feels good to get it out, no?
Yes, I am certain that many at one time or another have
wanted to write of this. We are on the stronger side.
The ones who need not spread judgment in order to
feel superior.
~Breezy |
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