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Dad
Contributed by
ilovelillbj
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:18:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Who are you?
But a name and a title
That you do not deserve,
Yet the threads of time
Can never undo that which
Means you're my father,
And what does that mean?
I've never known,
Could never guess,
Just imagine as a child,
Asking the mother for
Answers that I can't have, to
How could you?
Only now can i try to comprehend
What could turn one away
From their most basic instinct,
But the question remains
And I can't understand,
Why?
Why then did you do,
Did you not try to put right
Until now? I'm seventeen
Tomorrow, but as clueless
As the decade before, but
Is it ever too late?
Copyright ©
ilovelillbj
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2006-07-03 14:18:44]
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Re: Dad
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by wizard on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:33:22 PM AEST
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nicely done...it had a 'mysterious' feel to it...i liked it a lot!
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Re: Dad
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by mama4lyf on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 01:37:05 AM AEST
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| I must say i enjoyed reading this, i understand what your going through, and i really felt a connection to the poem. |
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