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broken hearts
Contributed by
viking-2272
on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:32:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One heart broken, twice to mend three times shattered, will it end?
Forbidden happiness, life is long; lonely is this soul that’s wronged
Elusive love beyond all reach, hidden promise but faith they preach
Sorrow filled this soul of mine, where is the loving heart sublime?
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Re: broken hearts
(User Rating: 1 ) by Junker on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 04:40:25 AM AEST (User
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I like it. Sometimes simple is the best way to go and able to communicate the most feelings.
If you separated your poem into shorter lines, it may make it easier to read. |
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