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Forget Me
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:10:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Forget me. Please, just do not remember,
The first time we kissed, one snowy December.
Forget the red of my lipstick, and the perfume that I wore,
And the way that we drank warm champagne, left over from the night before.
Forget the dress I was wearing, and the way I had my hair,
And the hotel room we were sharing, forget we were ever there,
Forget the stars of the night-time, and the dawning of the day,
Forget that the words came so easily, that we just knew what to say,
I can't forget you, though it hurts to remember,
That first time we kissed, one snowy December,
I remember your smile with each sip of champagne,
But most of all, I remember the pain.
Copyright ©
Ruby2sdy
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2006-07-03 11:10:27]
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Re: Forget Me
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by slayer_015 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:21:57 AM AEST
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That was one of the most beautiful and heart-felt poems I have ever read.Simple and sweet.
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Re: Forget Me
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:30:51 AM AEST
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Awww.
Sometimes the self explainatory ones are my faves. This is good. It really does just say what you want it to say.
I like the repetition, too.
Sad write.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Forget Me
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:15:52 PM AEST
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| This poem is filled with so much emotion. Lost love, so well written. Sue x |
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Re: Forget Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:50:05 PM AEST
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Well written piece. Your pain easily felt here. Sad but beautiful.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Forget Me
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 04:47:06 PM AEST
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a bittersweet tapestry well woven
Shari |
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Re: Forget Me
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by bluestars on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 12:56:19 AM AEST
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Amazing poem, I know mostly anyone can relate to this poem. It may be easier to forget but to forgive takes a little more work and time. Your not alone,
keep on writing.
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: Forget Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 06:22:00 AM AEST
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I wished it was so easy to move on and forget, but it's not. Such pain and sadness fill the page. You've done a fine job with this write. I just wished it was a happy ending~
Wishing u the best of luck~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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