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Breathe
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:39:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe
Feel the grief, the anger seethe,
Churn and boil through my soul,
Tumble inside with a jerky control.
Heart sucked into a hollow void,
Love and compassion, scorned and detroyed,
Fury appearing, rampant and free...
Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe
Cry out in fear that the madness won't leave.
Stuck in a whirl of emotions ablur,
Temper is left where feelings once were.
Rationality makes its retreat,
Harsh words hanging on its defeat,
And truth in tones that you fear to recieve...
Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe
Breathe once again, through quiet reprieve,
Calm the pain as anger subsides,
Wait for the tears to muffle the cries.
When choking sobs will silence the scream...
Leaving only regret, where anger had been,
And open my ears to emotional pleas...
Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe
Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe
Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe...
.......
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Re: Breathe
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by wizard on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:14:12 AM AEST
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excellently done!!!...
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Re: Breathe
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:34:15 AM AEST
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Wow Phyllis, I could feel the anger seething here. The deep breathing, I found myself doing. I can relate to this way too much. Well written piece. Loves ya, sis.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Breathe
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:35:59 PM AEST
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Great piece
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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... *wide-eyed stare at screen*
Philly ... WOW!! It's like you climbed inside me and pulled these words
from my very own soul!! You captured tremendous emotion here, hun.
TREMENDOUS!
Your conflict within is evident and holy wow, can you ever aritculate that well!
I think this piece is absolutely stunning! Even though it may have come from
inner frustration, it was so exquisitely put together .
I love it very much!!
(and relate all too well..)
*hugs*
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Re: Breathe
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 04:49:17 PM AEST
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Excellent
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:41:10 PM AEST
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Wow, this is amazing, Phyllis!!!!! I am stunned at how well you have relayed the emotion into this awesome poem.
And...um, yeah, Roxie said it so well I can't add much more.....so, yeah, what Roxie said.
Tim
(who is also relating to this all too well)
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Re: Breathe
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:08:27 AM AEST
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Phil~
You have poured out ur utmost inner thoughts and feelings in this write. One can feel ur emotions through ur words.
May the anger u feel in ur heart be replaced with warm and loving emotions.
Wishing you the very best sweet girl always~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*sue m*~ |
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Re: Breathe
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by Sagefairy on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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Yes breathe...
*hugs you*
It definitely gets the mood across, dear Philly.
J |
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