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Anew
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Summer breeze kisses her face
Today old pains she will erase
As she runs into the waves of blue
She decides to start her life anew
In the ocean she chooses to start
Letting the water cleanse her heart
To live to find she truly believes
In herself and she can achieve
Her dreams will unfold from here
Because her heart is filled with cheer
To love herself she has learned
And the rewards of such she will earn
Anew the life she holds will grow
And letting go of past she knows
Will open the future to new heights
She looks forward to life’s rocky fights
And the joy a new attitude brings
For lie ahead so many wonderful things
No longer old mistakes she will review
For she has learned to start life anew
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NoSaint
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2006-07-03 09:07:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST (User
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Uplifting piece. Great rhyming. Flowed well for me. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:34:32 AM AEST (User
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cool, simple rhyme scheme but effective, very nice,
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:47:17 AM AEST (User
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This is a smiling poem.
I like this a lot. It had a nice theme, and it's great to see a positive poem on the homepage.
Nice attitude, and lovely feeling.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:57:22 PM AEST (User
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I like this alot. Thank you for sharing this.
Joanna |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 08:29:48 PM AEST (User
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a lovely poem my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:01:26 AM AEST (User
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Shari~
A most welcomed uplifting and inspiring write you have wonderfully penned my dear friend. Your poetry always has depth and meaning. Thanks so much for posting this Shari~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*sue m*~ |
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Re: Anew
(User Rating: 1 ) by Winterland on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST (User
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Very nice piece with a lovely message for each of us.
Thank you!
Jennifer |
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