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YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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godsangel2006
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:13:13 AM in AEST
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Ypdc fantasy opera.Part 1
(katyqueen35)
Come near,ya nation,and hear what i demand.
Let the earth hear,and all the things that come forth of it.
I the priestess of doom,and i demands all thats good ,
and holy be put to death.
Come forth my slayers.
(Pixie -lostinmyself)
slayers
We are here my priestess of doom to do as you command.
For you are the great one to see it all end.
(katyqueen35)
Go forth and call orpheus and arden the evil two.
Before i decide what to do.
(Pixie-lostinmyself)
slayers
Yes my priestess.We will do as you command.
(pixie-lostinmyself)
behold lord orpheus and lady arden our priestess has summon you.
To bid as she wishes,slaughter all thats good and holy.
Beware if you don't follow thee priestess you will be in place of doom.
( arden)
Oh my love lord orpheus what shall we do?
For the wicked evil priestess summons us to do her bidding.
(orpheus)
Don't worry my love i have my own plan.
We shall pretend to do her bidding ,
where she won't know what hit her.
we shall take over and slay everything thats holy,
and slay the priestess of doom too.
to be continue
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 06:50:10 AM AEST
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*beams* You posted it again!
Wow... huuuge smile inducer here. (Even if it makes me look totally evil ;) :P )
You should finish this, hun. I really wanted to see the end.
*hugs tight*
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 12:40:41 PM AEST
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Oooooh, I like! I like!!
When do I get to read the end??? You have me intrigued, now you have to finish it : )
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 12:57:24 PM AEST
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Cool....okay, I'm ready to read more. *smiles* You've got my attention.
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 04:52:03 PM AEST
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well done I await the rest of the saga
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:19:46 PM AEST
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Awesome, godsangel2006, totally awesome!!!!!
*runs to read part two*
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:01:20 PM AEST
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I thoroughly enjoyed it so much. I gotta go and read part 2 now. Well done all of u~
warm hugs,
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Re: YPDC-FANTASY OPERA-part 1
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 02:45:12 PM AEST
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I was searching for the word for this fantastic piece and, found it in the comment of another - intriguing. Good work, darn ya. Now I have to go read Parts 2 and 3 and I really didn't intend to spend that much time on this computer!
wabl
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