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Cobwebs
Contributed by
bluestars
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Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:21:36 AM in AEST
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I don't know anymore
why you keep acting like this.
I wish I could read your mind,
and clear all the cobwebs inside.
I know it's hard to understand
and it hurts to look behind
I should know because,
I've tried so many times.
That's why I'm here to help you out
don't be scared cause I know you are
It's hard to understand what love is all about.
And even though I might be far,
I'll always be with you in mind and heart.
I won't let you lose it all,
I will be there when you fall.
Cause step by step we will find,
find a way for this love to stay alive.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2006-07-03 01:21:36]
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Re: Cobwebs
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by godsangel2006 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:26:23 AM AEST
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I thought your write was very good.
even though alittle sad but very nicely written. |
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Re: Cobwebs
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:37:59 AM AEST
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Eve~
I know it is hard for u, but continue with the support my friend. When u love someone from afar it hurts sometimes. I know the pain it can cause. Don't lose hope my friend. May things work out for u.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Cobwebs
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:22:44 AM AEST
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What a touching poem this is realy, such compassion it coveys and so beautiful in it's
stye and presentation. If it needs any thing i'd
say more reads and definately more coments. As for enjoyment/ it goes with out saying. Truly a lovely work in every scence of the word you've done your home not that you had to i might add.
Ben |
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Re: Cobwebs
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 12:54:31 PM AEST
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lovely:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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