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Sucide
Contributed by
shasha
on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These wrists I cut
Forced to do it by emotions that run deep
The blood that drips
Is as red as ruby
This didn't have to happen
But it was my last resort
Pushed to the limit
This was my only way out
There was no other choice
No other solution
I didn't even think
I couldn't even feel
As the knife cut deep
All that was in my mind was death
It didn't even happen
So I'm still here
About to jump off the cliff that I was pushed onto
I can't feel anything but pain
All other emotions have now disapeared
Is this the life I'm fored to live?
Will I try again?
Or decide to live
But if I live
I promise you this
I will have no love
I will have no trust
And I will only experience pain and hurt
If you let me go though
Let me die
I might continue onto a happier place
Somewhere where I just might be able to love again
I beg of you
Please choose to let me go
I know deep down I'll be happier
Just let me go
Just let me go...
Copyright ©
shasha
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2003-02-09 10:40:00]
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Re: Sucide
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by TheSpiritx on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:35:16 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, shasha.
This is a good poem. You embody the concept of and the feelings behind depression very well. Sometimes this is exactly what people think, and it's sad. I've been there.
I suffered, and occasionally still do, from bouts of depression. Though never contemplated suicide, I definitely lost contact with my emotions. I hated myself and everything else, but the day came in which I developed an indifference to the world. Even now I find myself pushing away those who want to get close to me and denying what it is I feel. It hurts, but we all just have to fight it however we can.
Thanks for your submission. |
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Re: Sucide
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:21:09 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful...it's so everything i feel...beautiful... |
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Re: Sucide
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by alwys2nv on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:38:54 AM AEST
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| beuatifully written, been there many times my self, keep up the good writting. |
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