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Stars
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
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Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 11:57:55 AM in AEST
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The stars in the sky,
Become fire in my eyes,
As I look up and wonder,
How they might die,
Is it like us?
With knives and guns?
With diseases and machines,
And electrical stuns?
Or is it more simple,
Like just burning out,
Only taking a few things,
Before they turn stout?
It’s up to chance,
Not our own hands,
So enjoy you life,
Embrace this land.
Copyright ©
shinji_kusa
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2006-07-02 11:57:55]
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Re: Stars
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by wizard on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:01:02 PM AEST
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nicely done!!!
wiz |
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Re: Stars
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by chaos78 on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:38:15 PM AEST
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| good job!! |
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Re: Stars
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by Exodus on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:38:43 PM AEST
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I dig it. We've got to embrace what we have. If we don't, what's the point?
Nicely written, keep it up. |
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Re: Stars
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by Logan on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 11:54:55 PM AEST
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| Short, but very meaningful. Great poem. |
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Re: Stars
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:47:58 AM AEST
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It's amazing how a few words can say so much. Powerful and well pointed out, we should cherish & embrace what we have. Well done I throughly enjoyed this one.
hugs galore,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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