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My Flower
Contributed by
karoody
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Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
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It was the most beautiful thing I had known
For my flower had the most radiant petals-
Any color you wish.
And oh, the best aroma of them all-
Sweeter than any rose.
But my flower was picked before its time,
And it was trampled on in the process.
The innocence of childhood lost forever.
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-02-09 10:00:00]
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Re: My Flower
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by notsoangelic3000 on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 05:16:39 PM AEST
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I love this poem,
It makes you wonder about the past,
you know have those good and bad flashbacks when you were 5 years old.
I like it, post more poetry to read. :)
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Re: My Flower
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 05:31:41 PM AEST
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Awww Kara...this is such a beautifully written piece... Tragic if I read it right...and I'm sorry. But it is so well done... I can feel your pain.. Hope all is well with you.
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Re: My Flower
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by roisin on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 07:09:21 PM AEST
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Jenni has said it so well...I echo her comments...
hugs
rosie |
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Re: My Flower
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 12:06:28 AM AEST
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| we see the past in the stars... |
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Re: My Flower
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:42:41 AM AEST
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| beautiful, beautiful poem... unfortunately, i can relate... although, every person's life/nightmare is different... but thank you for this precious bit of prose... |
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Re: My Flower
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:41:37 AM AEST
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I loved this short and bittersweet. I think I understand and its all to painfully true.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: My Flower
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 05:10:29 AM AEST
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| Flower here stands for the little heart which blossomed to shine on earth..It feels it is trampled by the society..and it bleeds ..but it has not lost its spirit .. the spirit is alive and the flower is alive. no human foot can touch the spirit.. It is a flower that can re-appear at the rise of the Dawn.. venkat |
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Re: My Flower
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:48:17 AM AEST
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karoody, this is so touching.... I loved the philosophy behind this.... but hey..you have LOTS more years ahead.... Great write, anyway,
Hugs to you ..
From my shores to your sands
yours Kolbrún |
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