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Three Magic Words
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:25:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Three Magic Words
To many days, I sit here alone
wondering what I should do
Always hoping and praying
that some day,it will be here with you
The thought of such a treasure
keeps me going, from day to day
To hold you in my arms
and those Three Magic Words to say
I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU,I LOVE YOU
the words we both want to hear
Shouting it from the highest mountain
or just whispering it,in your ear
The sound is just wonderful
the words are perfect,as well
It's Only to you,my darling
that these words,I want to tell
So listen very closely
try never,ever to forget
That we were made for each other
to be an everlasting,duet
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2006-07-02 03:25:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:36:14 AM AEST (User
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to be an everlasting,duet, I love that a beautiful poem xx |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by sadaddy on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:32:07 AM AEST (User
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Yes, those "Three Magic Words" hold such much power. So use them so ever wisley. Wonderful write guy.
sadaddy |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anu on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:49:52 AM AEST (User
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a gud thot n a gud imagination..!! |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:02:25 PM AEST (User
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awesome write...love that last stanza!!! |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 07:12:40 PM AEST (User
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Oh Bruce, this was STUNNING!!!
An incredible devoted write of love. The expression
of love is such an incredible thing in and of itself, but
to hear those words ... just wow. They are truly amazing.
They really are magic as they transform the ordinary into
the EXTRAORDINARY!!
Excellent write, Bruce. A masterfully soft emotion ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 09:09:02 PM AEST (User
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so magical and beautiful Bruce. This is as its meant to be.
Michelle |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by bluestars on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 12:38:41 AM AEST (User
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What a beautiful poem.
I really loved the last stanza it was the best.
Best wishes always,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: Three Magic Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by godsangel2006 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:25:09 AM AEST (User
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awww so sweet i am sure your love will love this. |
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