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The Death of an Angel
Contributed by
wizard
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Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 01:52:55 AM in AEST
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Empty days as angels sing their message to impart,
A dying love forever more to cease a fragile heart.
A word upon a simple prayer for hope to soon return,
Upon the day, the angel way, as lover's hearts so yearn.
A sacred bond for two to hold, so long does it evade
When it seems this bond is found, again two hearts betrayed.
Nightly battles fought and lost, soldiers bloodied in a thought;
Heaven’s glare upon the night; insidiously fraught.
Unto the night a wish is sent for love to soon obey,
An angel chancing by is fleetingly pulled astray.
She holds this wish and tries in vain to grant this endless plea;
Afraid she stands and realizes, it is an impossibility...
Bewildered as she glared upon this wish she could not grant
Uncertain of what was at hand, she begins to descant,
This wish of love was not sincere as seen in the angel’s eyes
For such a wish was merely made to settle helpless cries.
Too much for her to bear was this contradicting wish
Now outside of heaven’s gate she feels this heart's anguish.
The pain bestowed by this simple dream was all that she could stand
Soon the angel’s heart was torn; and her wings would soon disband.
She fell from heaven for this wish made on this fateful day
Confused how one could want to love, if it’s so quickly thrown away
“Be careful what you wish for” she cried, her last amen,
Then quietly she faded by, as this angel died again.
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:01:22 AM AEST
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good write! i loved the poem over all! Too much for the angel to bear was this contradicting wish
Now outside of heaven’s gate she feels all of earth’s anguish
The pain bestowed by this simple dream was all that she could stand
Soon the angel’s heart was torn; soon halo and wings would disband-- these lines are really good! nice job! |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:30:26 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:56:40 AM AEST
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| This is a brilliant poem, so sad to the way the world is now the Angels must cry. xxx |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Ruby2sdy on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:14:45 AM AEST
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very nicely done, once again! I very much enjoyed this piece, sad and original,
2sdyx |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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This is such a deeply moving, and thought-provoking piece Wiz....wow. You seem to have written this with such a clarity of thought and purpose, and the forlorn feeling throughout is unmistakable. This is definitely a new favourite by you...Very well done.
Scorp. |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:53:47 PM AEST
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Am amazing write. So beautifully written.
N_O |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 06:57:38 PM AEST
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Molto Mestaso in engllish Very Majestic, a peice of nobility written about the heart
of love at it's most betraying moment. splendid writting as usual.
Ben |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 08:40:19 PM AEST
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beautiful work bro..
pinnacle sadness.. the 5th stanza is excellent,
as is the entire work;
realtive to many of my own struggles.
..a fairytale of sorrow and lament..
I love it-
Love,
Billy |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:13:07 PM AEST
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Paul~
Such sorrow , pain and suffering protrude from ur write. I felt every painful emotion through ur well ascribed and detailed poem. Thought provoking and deep. Now sadly the Angel dies, just like innocence. A remarkable masterpiece. Your poetry has reached new heights. Keep up the great work Wiz~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:26:11 PM AEST
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| Beautifully sad.. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by godsangel2006 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:23:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful and yet sad.
i really love it
thanks for sharing
hugs
K |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:06:50 PM AEST
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| Great piece and beautifully written |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 05:39:17 PM AEST
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now i see why your wizard
you have a magical way with words
I just cant wait to see what you
pull from your crystalball
Lol
Great poem |
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Re: The Death of an Angel
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:10:35 AM AEST
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Nicely done wiz. I enjoyed the third and 4th stanzas. They were good. Keep it up.
xxx
~kei |
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