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i cant breathe
Contributed by
darkness_angel
on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 09:45:47 PM in AEST
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I can't breathe,
why do I do this to me?
Conscious choice,
when I was younger,
sitting there,
in despair,
boredom, discontent,
I couldn't bear.
So who cares?
Kill me puff by puff,
nice slow death,
hmm.... rough.
Didn't bother me then,
now I can't breathe,
just like this,
gasp, heave.
Click of the lighter,
again and again,
in my moments of joy,
I regret it then.
Because now
I can't breathe,
but the demon
has hold on me.
Copyright ©
darkness_angel
... [
2006-07-01 21:45:47]
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Re: i cant breathe
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by Zanobia on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 11:06:34 PM AEST
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wow, tht was awsome.
wow.
please keep on writting, you have a real gift.
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Re: i cant breathe
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 06:58:33 PM AEST
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Very good write..
God Bless! |
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