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Unknown Feeling
Contributed by
lilmom101
on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 10:45:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your skin, sheets of satin
the smell of flowers covers your body.
your smell sufficating
your hair as gold shining bight.
the sight blinding
your lips of sweet strawberries
the taste intoxicating
is it love or lust
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2006-07-01 10:45:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unknown Feeling
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 01:30:35 PM AEST (User
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nice! short and potent! great write nice imagery |
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Re: Unknown Feeling
(User Rating: 1 ) by sensible_paper on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 08:31:03 AM AEST (User
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great imagery, and very to the point nicely written and well done |
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