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Devil in the Detail
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 09:03:37 AM in AEST
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The night the dark embraced me
Was the night I was reborn,
She was a devil in the shadows
But an angel in the morn
She drew from me confessions,
And gave penance for my sins
Then whispered through her ruby lips,
‘Payment now begins’.
The devil’s in the detail,
The problems in the small
I should have read the fine print
But I signed away it all
I should’ve focussed on the picture,
And not the stunning frame
She shook me off the Richter
But I’m lining up again
She came to me for closure,
But left me without breath
She drew from me my lover’s soul
And drained me near to death
There was steel in her voice that night,
Just when I thought her frail
She said, ‘It’s time to pay the fiddler’
And drove me to travail.
I’ve been told that foolish wishes
Only buy you pain and grief
There are dames there for the asking,
And others out of reach
But I dreamt of a seductress
And we joined in sweet contract,
Just read between the lines before you
Make a lover’s pact.
The devil’s in the detail,
The problems in the small
I should have read the fine print
But I signed away it all
I should’ve focussed on the picture,
And not the stunning frame
You never know what hit you,
But you’d do it all again.
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spike
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2006-07-01 09:03:37]
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 10:57:54 AM AEST
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Spike~
Your insight into the affairs of the desperately heart-filled as always, are conveyed with
flawless wordship. I am impressed with the flow of this, but not only does it fall off the tongue
easily, it sears the soul with brandishing heat!! I would more or less be inclined to agree that
once you've requested a song ... [or dance], you must be prepared to offer up for the collection.
However.. if you let the song find you, well then .. how glorious and enchanting the melodious
sounds of the heartstrings then become. Hopeless romantic? Perhaps, but I still see through
writes such as this, (though you did not exactly say it with words), there are those who wish,
dream and hope for something greater. Something of which makes this life .. sweet.
A most intelligible and exceptional write, dear spike.
~Breezy |
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 06:23:20 PM AEST
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This sucker sings, Spike! Let me pull out my SUPERB sign fer the Slam! It definitely flowed like a song or maybe some devilish lawyer's contract. Pay up! Nice pic o' yer girlfriend!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST
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This is absolutely awesome!!! Got me smilin' (and I really need that now) and it's like I could hear the rhythm and the beat as I read. Too cool! :-)
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:12:47 AM AEST
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| Fantastic poem, so much talent on here, this poem and many others I have read on here should be published xx |
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 02:47:02 AM AEST
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Spike~
You're an amazing and gifted poet who can always produce the most outstanding and sensational writes. No matter what the topic or subject you can always deliver the goods.
Well done dearest Spike~
warm hugs,
~*sue m*~ |
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 12:07:27 PM AEST
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Owh. Spike's made a pact with the devil and sold his soul for love!?
Aw, well, it happens to the best of us, no?
She drew from me confessions,
And gave penance for my sins
Then whispered through her ruby lips,
‘Payment now begins’.
Nicely done. i thknk i liked that the best.The entire poem is prett darn sweet and seductive, as i'm sure you wanted it to be.
Great write.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: Devil in the Detail
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 03:14:39 AM AEST
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'I should have read the fine print
But I signed away it all'
Yep,Spike, we all have to pay the ferryman and most of us get thrown off mid-stream..You're never off the mark,quality as always.Should make one hell of a song,
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