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Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
Contributed by
MrPerfect
on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 09:51:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You, You were my world
It came crashing down
but I was there to catch it
with some help from friends
I always thought about you
I still do but not in the same emotion
I always enjoyed being around you
but now i feel used when I'm around you
I used to brag about you to my family
but now when they bring you up
I change the subject
I used to think that we were meant to be
I think differently now
You manipulated me on levels
that are inethical to many people
After all I went through
I was foolish enough to think
that I could easily spend
the rest of my life with you
Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
Copyright ©
MrPerfect
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2006-06-30 21:51:19]
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Re: Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
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by Lucid_Tides on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:06:59 PM AEST
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| This tunnel vision, it could happen to anyone, and a lot of people feel this same emotion. Very good write. I hope Im not being fooled as well. |
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Re: Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
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by -xhaleyx- on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:17:50 PM AEST
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VEery well said. I think both you you need to move on. Yes she manipulated you, but she prolly doesnt see how. I love how you express cleary how you think of this whole situation, and if no one had any idea what happened with you guys, after reading this...they would have to ask questions.
Hope all goes well
-x haley x- |
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Re: Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
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by tifrob on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:11:26 PM AEST
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Your poem is straight forward, which I think is a big plus. Good luck!
J~ |
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Re: Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 01:41:05 AM AEST
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Simply a masterpeice!
I know that feeling well.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fooled By The Tunnel Vision Of Love
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by zeppchic420 on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:22:14 PM AEST
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| how sad too many of us are able to sympathise. great, really. |
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