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Three Stages of Grief
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 04:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The Torment
Sorrow swallowed me into the cruel black sea,
The icy cold water washed over me,
Memories spin around in my mind,
Causing dark lucid dreams of every kind.
Grief and misery played their part,
Leaving behind a broken heart
The Healing
Slowly the water ebbed away,
The blackness mellowed to a shade of grey,
Time as the healer showed the way,
Helping me to cope day by day,
Fear subsiding,confidence reigns,
Ready to face the world again
The Future
The waters now are calm and clear,
My life again is full of cheer,
Smiles return and with them light,
The grey is replaced by colours so bright,
Though life was cruel,when it took you away,
I look to the future as a brand new day
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:06:47 PM AEST
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Well written, good flow, I liked the ending
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by a7x36 on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 01:42:19 AM AEST
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| like the 2nd stanza the most, it flows well |
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 11:29:44 AM AEST
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| Sue its a poem that explains just what you went through and how you came out the other side, gives hope to many people going through the same emotions, that there is a light at the end.. xxxx |
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST
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I love the emotion, the flow, the darkness, the sadness, the healing, the optimism, and the happy ending.
I look forward to your next poem. :-)
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by JGB on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 03:15:17 AM AEST
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What can really be said?
This is beautiful!
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Re: Three Stages of Grief
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 07:02:45 PM AEST
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Sue~
Your emotions run deep with this write my dear friend. Where pain, sadness & darkness were now are replaced with healing, hope & optimism. Chin up sweet Sue and may ur days ahead never be blue.
Wishing you the very best always.
lov, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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