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Never To Know
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 09:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Taken by choice
Never given a chance
Never to run and play
Or learn to dance
Removed like garbage
No concern for its life
Never to know joy
Or suffer daily strife
An inconvenience
To be cast aside
Never to sing
Or go for bike ride
True loss is to Mother
Who never will know
The love that this
Little child could show
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-06-30 09:59:46]
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Re: Never To Know
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by Kevin on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:27:31 AM AEST
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we all have to make our peace w/God and everyone does it in his/her own way. You expressed your way w/such beauty in this poem that all i can say is wow. Excellent write
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Re: Never To Know
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:38:39 AM AEST
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| I am pro-choice Shari, but you wrote this very well. I do respect you and your opinions. Peace my friend, Laura |
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Re: Never To Know
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 12:03:53 PM AEST
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| I am nuetral on this subject, though saying that I could never do it. But some have good reasons. You have written this well, I respect what you have wrote. Sue x |
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Re: Never To Know
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:23:58 PM AEST
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This is my first read of your work and I am super impressed! You have taken a tragedy seemingly done matter of factly in today's world and put a face and emotion to what too many think an inconvenience or just their way for "birth control". You have just made a fan!
Magnificent and masterful work.
wabl
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Re: Never To Know
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by chaos78 on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 04:54:44 PM AEST
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truly truly beautiful but sad excellent write
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Re: Never To Know
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by wrdz on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 05:52:12 PM AEST
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| I hope one day to have respect for what I have written. But too often, people seem to think that there is probably half a world of distance between them and me, so they just lay out something not caring how it might be recieved. Well, my friend, this was well recieved and proud to say well written, too. Congratulations on a job very well done. wrdz |
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Re: Never To Know
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by tifrob on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 11:23:36 PM AEST
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We all have to walk our own roads. Sometimes being open to other opinions opens windows into our owen souls. Good work.
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Re: Never To Know
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 11:09:44 AM AEST
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TRAGIC! So unnatural, but understanding, and with a Most Loving, Kind and Compassionate Creator who forgives generously.........even forgivenable!
Wise write Shari, and how many times this happens in our unloving world would bring us all to our knees.
A very touching subject that you did very well my friend.
Warm love
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Re: Never To Know
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:47:31 PM AEST
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| Until you have walked in someones shoes, who are we to condem. You always have a way with words and tell your stories beautifully even when tragic. Great write Shari......Mike |
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