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Bed Time
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 07:38:09 AM in AEST
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Bed Time
Blanky, bottle, bed and Bath
Are all the things I need
But don稚 forget my teddy bear,
And the story that you値l read
The day was long, we sang and danced
And ran around the yard
And even though I知 tired,
Going to sleep is really hard.
But if you remember all those things
That help me go to sleep
I値l lay down with a smile,
That痴 a promise I can keep
I値l dream some dreams, sleep all night,
Call your name and then
You値l get me up, change my clothes
And we値l do it all again
Copyright ﾂｩ
poet_in_waiting
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2006-06-30 07:38:09]
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Re: Bed Time
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:10:27 AM AEST
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Very charming and touching poem. see it's not hard, especialy with the insperation u have around you. Beautiful job, and there not silly, quite frankly in these times there actualy
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Re: Bed Time
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by yackerz85 on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:28:58 AM AEST
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| Things like this will be appreciated by your child down the road. People are way too focused on material things these days. It is often the sentimental things like writing your daughter poems that make the most impact on childrens lives. I think that your idea of writing a book of poetry for your kids is a great one, and someday when I have kids I might do the same. |
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Re: Bed Time
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:29:10 AM AEST
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| In these days of modern technology, and frankly cruel world its a pleasure to read of the simple things in life. Thay are a joy, and have an innocence so fresh. This poem is beautiful and emphasises that old values and ways still count. Loved it . Sue x |
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Re: Bed Time
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 05:21:24 PM AEST
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| Very nice indeed... |
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Re: Bed Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 05:49:38 PM AEST
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| Truely a book of poems like this would be a treasure to anyone, keep writing.......Mike |
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Re: Bed Time
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 01:17:32 PM AEST
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Very nice
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