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Yesterdays
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 11:47:50 PM in AEST
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Lying under the stars
I hear the whispering wind
The blowing of it moves me
Sending shivers down my skin
I hear its hidden message
The words that it conveys
And I hear it calling
For yesterdays…
I fall into the longing
The reminders it still bares
The pain that still lingers
This soul that we once shared
And I still feel it in me
Yet don’t know what words to say
When I hear it calling
For yesterdays…
Souls will always beg out
For better things than this
And the life that we once had
I know you miss…
And I linger on through sadness
Barely make it day by day
Still needing and praying
For yesterdays…
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Re: Yesterdays
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by bluestars on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 12:44:08 AM AEST
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Wow great poem i can really relate it sucks sometimes but dont worry as time passes it gets better so hold your head up high.
Best wishes always,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by Sinned on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 06:29:23 AM AEST
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Emotional sad cleverly written--good job.
Yes feelings endure.
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Re: Yesterdays
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by poet_in_waiting on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 07:44:54 AM AEST
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I really like it ... the different cadence of the poem when you say "For Yesterdays " really hammers it home.
I used to catch myself still wandering what if often.
cheers
sean |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by chaos78 on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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| wow beautiful written i think we all look back and want that one day back well said here |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by DarkFaerie on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 04:36:25 PM AEST
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wow chris. im speechless. fantastic job. i expecially loved these lines:
Souls will always beg out
For better things than this
And the life that we once had
I know you miss…
amazing. 5 stars |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 01:37:03 PM AEST
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I found your poem very refreshing indeed!
Yes, there was sadness, and lingering, but it's OK to visit Yesterday as long as you don't stay................very long.
For there are two days in our lives that we must not concentrate on. One is yesterday, and the other is tomorrow. These are the two days that can drive mankind wild!
I too visit yesterday.........for good or bad, but I try to visit for a very short while.........I'm afraid I'll miss something that is happening "right now!"
Loved it
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Re: Yesterdays
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by JGB on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 02:55:17 AM AEST
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I have had two deaths in my family that have been close and you just hit them both.
I guess we all see something and Yesterdays is something
Joanna G Barber |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 04:05:06 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, I can relate to this yesterday was once tomorrow, im trying to just think of today and tomorrow as we can never go back its so hard though... Its so easy to get stuck in the past its normal when you remember things were better then.... We can get chained down by the past and have to work on the new yesterdays being happy memories. xxx |
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Re: Yesterdays
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:06:38 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. |
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