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I miss you when...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 07:14:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I miss you when I awake, every day, every... single... day...
I know your better off.
Because you let me I would never be what you’re looking for.
I only hope that he treasures you
I hope that he obsesses over you
I hope that he values you...
the way I have...the way I do…
And I know that I’m not;
handsome enough to catch your eye
funny enough to make you laugh
or talented enough to entertain you...
so I tried...
harder than any man ever will for you...
I know I could’ve done so much more
To simply let you know I cared
I tried so hard…
Everyday to do everything for you
but I failed... apparently...
I didn’t focus on the right things…
The things that mattered to you…
the only thing I ever achieved,
was to make myself completely yours.
I gave to you everything, as much as I had
and you only wanted more...
so I tried harder and harder... I gave you all
but once you realized, that you had all of me...
there was no challenge, so you got bored.
I failed you and you left…
I hate myself for all the tears
I hate myself for the bad years
I hate myself for what I put you through…
And I’m only sorry for one thing...
I’m only sorry that I couldn’t grow to be what you needed me to be,
to make you stay in love with me...
I miss you when my heart beats
I miss you when I breathe
I miss you when I close my eyes
I miss you why'd you leave....
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Re: I miss you when...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 08:05:36 PM AEST
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this is shattering
*my heart breaks for you*
I have felt this way (oh so very much so) and please fight those feelings of inadequacy.....hold yourself in high esteem because this is a brilliant write.
she has lost a gem. |
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Re: I miss you when...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 08:52:02 PM AEST
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awww this hit home.. beautiful write but so sad.. very well in expression and it made me get tears in my eyes.. beautiful Job
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: I miss you when...
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:08:39 PM AEST
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| *double sigh* i cant catch my breath, your poem says it all. wonderful, sad write. |
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Re: I miss you when...
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by bluestars on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 12:32:33 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last 4 lines. Im really sorry it didnt work out but i guess she really didnt value all the things you offered her cause if she did then she would have hanged on to you.
Best Wishes Always,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: I miss you when...
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:05:54 AM AEST
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All the sadness in these words, and regret, make it a good read. It cries out to be read. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sue x
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