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As Love and Death Collide
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 06:42:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Tonight I opened my eyes
What have I done?
Shining silver gouged in my heart
I didn't mean to hurt anyone
Solace is my home
As I deal with the discomfort
Of blood stained hands
I killed myself tonight
Misfortune embraced my prosperity
She's so cold, look what I've done
Frigid body.. the only one left to cry
A lament for sombre eyes
A Heart-rending weep
That took life away from me
Tonight I died
Within the cross swords
Of Love and Death
Her eyes on the ensign
Of the Shrine on their flag
Still crying for me
Her eyes still burn the flames of passion
As we exalt above the warfare
And escape this life of carnage
But pain is brought back by the words that were cried
Tears stream down the faces of the beloved
Vitalic wounds reopen for those who died
Still sad struck and weeping
As love and death collide
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Re: As Love and Death Collide
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by Seans_Girl on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 07:54:47 PM AEST
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| I like the poem but it is very sad and depressing. |
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Re: As Love and Death Collide
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 08:08:46 PM AEST
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powerfully written...indeed saturated in darkness..but a potent and yet inspiring darkness.
enjoyable read.
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Re: As Love and Death Collide
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Lucid~
A deep, dark and powerful write.
The brilliance of such poetry comes from a very talented poet who has displayed such outstanding masterpieces from the time he hit YPDC. Well done my friend.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: As Love and Death Collide
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by MissMandy on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:01:57 AM AEST
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| A very moving and definitely truthful poem. Me gusta. |
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Re: As Love and Death Collide
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:10:43 AM AEST
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| This was such a tragic poem and done so beautifully. It was so easy to feel. |
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