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Halcyon Whispers
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 06:27:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Life moves quicker
Than the eye can see
This moment, so bitter,
I don't want to miss a beat
When it's the end of time
And the sky begins to die
I'll show the real inside
While laughing with those who died
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Lucid_Tides
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2006-06-29 18:27:41]
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Re: Halcyon Whispers
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 08:11:35 PM AEST
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I sense an unspeakable sorrow in this poem.
on your behalf perhaps?
I hope it is merely poetry...
but again, well done.
your a promising writer.
I enthuse you to keep at it. |
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Re: Halcyon Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:06:36 PM AEST
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I'll join you in your laughter!
N_O |
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Re: Halcyon Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 03:22:59 AM AEST
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A robust short piece, rich with quality.
You always seem to offer a different perspective...something which holds my interest.
Fluent expression and some thought provoking suggestions. |
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