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Ricky
Contributed by
chulysnacky
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Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 04:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can you hear me?
Someone?, Anyone?
I use to be able to be seen,
Now everything is always a big scene.
When is he going to wake up from this dream?,
This nightmare that lies within...
It lies deeply underneath my skin!
How funny it seems...
to remember all the good with him!
My Love!... I call him Ricky and Yeah,
he sure is picky...
and lately our situations get real sticky!
I wish I could ask you why Ricky???
I feel like sometimes he just tricked me
when he picked me..., I just want
to breathe again, call him my man...
and just hold his hand...
I miss you My Love, so why?
Why you diss me for your thugz?
Yes I do!.. I do Love you, you my boo...
Ricky!
Copyright ©
chulysnacky
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2006-06-29 16:59:49]
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Re: Ricky
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 05:33:10 PM AEST
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What an honest poem, innocent and yet assertive. Nice poetic flow and presentation.
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Re: Ricky
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by OzChick on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 08:18:33 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, so full of heart, and heartbreak.
Good rhythm and the rhyme scheme works well.
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