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D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 12:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Flesh gracefully parted like a whore’s limbs
Impregnated with guilt the shade of dead roses
Memories exploding like Hiroshima from my
~ Wrists tastefully tattered ~
Swelling
Like a destitute heart that injected too much adoration
In its dusty veins
Dark red and luscious
Warm and delightfully thick
Wine of my body / b i t t e r declaration /
I’m still living.
Hope is just another word for destruction
G
N
I
R
A
O
S
Too high { ****** up on saccharine lies }
Crashing down like 9/11
And I could say I told you so
As you lay shattered on the floors of reality
Splattered angel of illusion
Masochistic little mirror
But you have already foreseen your downfall
Since the first day of slumber
In your mother’s womb of thorns.
| The blood flows for the last time… |
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2006-06-29 12:15:33]
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Kimberlynn on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 01:59:39 PM AEST
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| Thats really good...Sad, but full of depth. Please tell me you didn't do that to yourself though. |
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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I love the the image of the mirror that forsees it's down fall. Your creativity always shines through the words and subjects of your writes. You must know though, that I wholly disagree with the hope sentiment. * Uber Squeezies Stephy *
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 04:02:06 AM AEST
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Well tailored in structure, to suit your thoughts and line of expression.
This piece is built on a strong foundation of bold convictions.
You have a way with metaphors that extend beyond their purpose.
Imagery burns to the readers mind like pyrography.
"Too high { ****** up on saccharine lies }"
Powerful.
I'm loving it.
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Faust on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 10:26:51 PM AEST
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Very well penned. It's a shame that the last part was edited out.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:30:28 PM AEST
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| wow...that was deep. i seriously like that. maybe one of the best poems i've read in awhile. |
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Drapes on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:26:49 PM AEST
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Wow.
I loved the word choice and especially the format!
GREAT JOB! |
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Re: D.i.v.i.n.e Mutilation
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by Lee on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 06:43:53 AM AEST
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Sad. Wings. of Destiny:
Good form. chasing off boundaries.
good stuff |
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