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Just
Contributed by
Jen54
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Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 12:00:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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breathe
just breathe
leave the pain behind
the past is the past
theres nothing you can do now
so breathe
just breathe
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Jen54
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2006-06-29 00:00:01]
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Re: Just
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 01:01:25 AM AEST
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your words spoke volumes in a small precise work. Nicely done. Your so very right!
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Re: Just
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 04:43:41 AM AEST
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| You are tight you cant go back, nothing can change the past it makes you depressed going over and over things in your mind... Thanks for reminding me. x |
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Re: Just
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:29:42 AM AEST
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very short yet very expressive.. I enjoyed reading this piece.. good job
JENNITTUDE
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Re: Just
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 06:45:16 PM AEST
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True, the past in best forgotten when it has bad memories.
Trouble is, often we let the past shape our future decisions.
Nice work
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Re: Just
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 07:47:25 AM AEST
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Sometimes you don't have to say much to say a lot
Keep it up
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