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You
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:34:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I gave it my best shot
Yet, it was all in vain
Broken windows, slammed doors
I'm broken; and its a damned shame
I don't understand these boundries
I don't comply with these walls
Disembled to somthing else
And its all your fault
Being here is unhealthy
In too many ways
Yet I've returned once again
Making nothing of these days
You suck me into a black hole
Reminding me of what I'll be, always
You: squeze me into
A mold
Same routine
We're both getting too old
For this
This same *****
I'm struggline to express
Gasping for real air
Kept this pillow to suppress
This stale excuse for a life:
What you have forced on me
The mold wont fit
You aren't what I'm meant to be
I'm sick of the same bull*****
Why can't you see?
I'm too close to you
The least you could to
Is attempt to understand me
But thats so unlike you
Why can't you just accept?
I find nothing wrong with me
You are the only one left
Repetitive lines of
The same story
Over and over
Yet, you don't hear me
You don't understand me
I can't stand you
You drew this circle we follow
You drag me, I follow too
I know: you won't catch me if I fall
I know: you won't come if i call
You've been out of reach
Def-ears out of tune
This will be the last time
I came back to soon
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2006-06-28 19:34:12]
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 10:16:35 PM AEST
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hate poetry at it's best! i loved it...it's an amazing poem, and you are an awesome writer.
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Re: You
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by mazeof_darkness on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:39:09 PM AEST
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| Awsome, love it!!! You are a great writter. |
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Re: You
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 05:00:29 AM AEST
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| I lived with that as a child, its worse for children when two people return to each other and continue to fight, I used to pray my parents devorced they never did and we suffered. It is a love hate thing and its best to get away before it distroys you and children if you have any. brilliant poem though. |
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