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Heart Of Stone.
Contributed by
maestar
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Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 06:17:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tears rest behind my empty eyes, like me they will never be released,
The hopes and dreams I once possessed are going, gone, deceased.
Perfectly sculpted arms hold my darling tight,
Protecting him from a cold and dreaded night.
He gazes into my forever- smiling face and I beg my still heart to race,
And our chiselled bodies to finely close the space.
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maestar
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2006-06-28 18:17:44]
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Re: Heart Of Stone.
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by Manda2 on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 06:53:33 PM AEST
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| A brilliant poem Maestar, there is a statue like this one outside a shopping centre in Kent and you can't help wondering about the stillness of the stone people staring at each other endlessly. Whatever inspired you to write about this poor sculpture! Genius! |
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Re: Heart Of Stone.
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:45:59 PM AEST
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awesome write! great premise! i loved it!
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Re: Heart Of Stone.
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 02:57:15 AM AEST
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| very touching |
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Re: Heart Of Stone.
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:56:07 AM AEST
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| Thats beautiful can imagine them loving each other but never really being together as they want, sad to... xxxx |
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