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DROWNING WITH INSANITY
Contributed by
unwanted
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Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:33:40 AM in AEST
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DROWNING WITH INSANITY
A girl in her room filled with personality,
Looking out she can see the chilled white snow,
With the cold darkness apone it.
Her drowning with insanity.
Why she has such a connection with the snow's cold darkness,
For wich her heart is based on,
For what the cold winter nights bring her.
But for what the morning brings her,
As she can see the herizon amongs the snow coverd trees,
where she feels warmth and see's beauty
but only looking through the window where she drowns with insanity
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2006-06-28 11:33:40]
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Re: DROWNING WITH INSANITY
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:39:34 AM AEST
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Emotional write overall the poem is good minus a couple typing errors or misspellings.
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Re: DROWNING WITH INSANITY
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by msmonroe on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 10:07:35 PM AEST
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I like this. I like poetry that requires some reading into.
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Re: DROWNING WITH INSANITY
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 12:37:46 PM AEST
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Your poem reminds me of one I wrote many years ago. I can understand how you can look at the world outside but feel as if you'll always be trapped behind the window; watching life from a distance. A good write and I like the 'drowning with insanity' ending. Keep on sharing!
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