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Lost and Found
Contributed by
jerseysue
on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:34:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Lost
Today I was in a dark valley,
Where shadows and fears abide,
There was thorns and barbed wire fences,
And I was trapped inside.
Fear an dread taking over,
Gloom and doom as my friends,
The bright side of life devoured,
By the ogres and ghouls called dead end.
Found
From the darkness a voice can be heard,
Shouting"Where are you my friend"
You were lost ,but now I have found you,
I will put you together again,
At once the dark clouds lifted,
Bringing sunshine,blue sky,no rain,
To a world of sunshine and flowers,
The land of the living again..
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2006-06-28 02:34:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost and Found
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 03:01:16 AM AEST (User
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Very good ending.
good work.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Lost and Found
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:00:56 AM AEST (User
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Sue~
"My friends have made the story of my life. In a thousand ways they have turned my limitations into beautiful privileges, and enabled me to walk serene and happy in the shadow cast by my deprivation"
(quoted by Helen Keller)
May darkness and sadness never plague ur life my friend. It's great to see that you have these special friends in ur life to share the good and bad times with. Where would we be without our friends? They help see us through alot of things.
Thank you for posting this Sue~
Sending u the best of wishes ur way always,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Lost and Found
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 08:34:42 AM AEST (User
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that is what friends are for....I like the way you write...good flow
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Re: Lost and Found
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 09:58:12 AM AEST (User
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Fantastic write, Sue, with such beautiful words and wonderful flow. I really like that Lost/Found presentation. Ain't friends grand!
wabl
KenMoore
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