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Tears of an Angel
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
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Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 12:21:39 AM in AEST
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Tears will shed as time goes by
Everlasting lights will eventually die
Arias of the Angels will silently fade
Requiem of pain will soon be repaid
Sorrows will pass with the break of day
Our souls will unite in a heart-rending way
Fragile hearts will mend with time
Another mountain for us to climb
Nothing will shatter hope in our eyes
Another attempt failed for our demise
Neglecting the feelings of a bitter end
Grace will fall as we descend
Elegies weeped for those who died
Long live the angels and the tears that they've cried
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:57:27 AM AEST
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| oooo this is awsome i love it. |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 04:07:31 AM AEST
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I agree, a very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by Aeris030388 on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST
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| This is very moving and beautifully done. I loved it. - Roxanne. |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:13:15 AM AEST
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Lucid~
You never cease to amaze me u know that. You have once again weaved ur magic on us through this moving and most beautifully penned masterpiece. I love the title, it drew me in and the poem topped it off. Well done ~*LT*~ May ur pen always flow so fluently with such beautiful masterpieces.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:42:47 AM AEST
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Very beautiful!
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:35:52 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. its short and powerful.. I love the flow of this.. very well expressed.. I love it!! thanks for sharing
**haunted_Soul
*JENNITTUDE** |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:50:24 AM AEST
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| This is such a wonderful poem! Loved it! |
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 07:01:23 PM AEST
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A excellent write...
Beautifully written..
God Blessing
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Re: Tears of an Angel
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by bluewolf on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:59:54 PM AEST
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| very beautiful poem. loved it. |
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