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lost......
Contributed by
Destiny
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Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
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They say that love will last forever
then why so many broken families.......
broken hearts........
broken children
don't you see what you've done?
and they call us the superior race.......
not even rats hurt their offspring as you've done me
I know you see
you understand and show no remorse
no words can explain what you've done
no name is foul enough to call you
you see you know you do
and you pretend
but I see through the fogs of pretending
I see your inside face
it's something that you're pretending can not hide
tell yourself what you want
maybe if you say it enough you'll begin to believe
that's what you want isn't it?
to believe you were the adult
and the good parent
so keep saying it as many times as you need
eventually you'll convince yourself of it
but here I'll be sitting
and I'll know the truth
I'll never be like you
keep dreaming
you know what you've done and you live a dream
I hope the dream suits you
all I want your life to be is a living nightmare
a living hell
I pray for it everyday
I don't care if I damn myself in doing so
you deserve all harm that falls upon you
think what you want of me
I see the real you
and one day......
maybe after never
the rest will see you too
you'll be cast out and alone
even after never it'll please me
to see you get what you deserve
I hope you listened carefully
----Destiny
Jan. 8, 2002
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Re: lost......
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by karoody on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 12:26:44 AM AEST
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Very powerful write. Took a lot of courage.
Good luck in moving forward. |
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Re: lost......
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:30:59 PM AEST
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Dear Destiny, I hope that this helped you get a moment of anger out so you could be done with it. Such bitter feelings hurt you more than anyone else. We ALL are disappointed by our parents at sometime ... and as parents, we ALL will disappoint our children for not being as perfect as they think we should be.
Let me tell you a secret. Parents can't be just what you wish they were. They are human, may love you alot, but just are not capable.
I take it that you have not found God yet. I hope you do. With love, Great-grandma Bizzy |
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Re: lost......
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:14:40 AM AEST
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wow a bitter pill this one
but a great write well done
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: lost......
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 11:33:56 AM AEST
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| I think that it's the best poem that i have ever dedicated to my ex-boyfriend! |
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Re: lost......
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by crimsonbatlady on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:06:35 AM AEST
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Umm, I hope that you're not passing off the first few lines as your own...
Because I have read a book that uses that quote... And I'm sure that you aren't the person that the author took it from.
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