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Hit the Play
Contributed by
fielding88
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:15:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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There are days when the record
Doesn’t play quite so,
But you still hit the Play
To hear that melodic cacophony.
And I’ll lay down my head and hum
To the tune playing in my head,
After I hit that Play;
Eyes closed and searching
For that familiar beat.
Then I’ll drift into a dream,
Leaving familiar behind
When I hit the Play;
And I awake with the Stars,
Dancing to a broken symphony.
In time it all slips away,
And I’m left so unfulfilled
When I hit the Play,
And all my searching
Finds only a crackled refrain.
But there are still those days
When the Record plays just so.
For when you hit the Play,
And lay down by my side and hum,
My search for harmony ends.
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fielding88
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Re: Hit the Play
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:05:09 PM AEST
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wow I really enjoyed this piece.. it flows so nice and its pretty inspirational.. give you that push for hope or motivation to hope on something.. thanks for sharing
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Re: Hit the Play
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:10:26 PM AEST
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Sometimes it is more than that Marc, the right song, at the right time ... in the presence of the right companion ... and even on the right system even.
I can most definately relate. I hope that harmony fills more and more of your days.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by breny on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 11:56:40 AM AEST
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Hey Marc it's nice to see another write from you!
This is fantastic and it's funny because I experience the same things you do when I listen to certain music.
Wonderful write and I look forward to reading more from you!
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by Unbreakable on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 09:52:27 PM AEST
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Wow. I really liked this poem Marc! I'm not sure if it was supposed to be metaphorical but it could certainly be interpreted that way. Like even when something isn't going as great as it could be, you persevere because eventually it will be worth it,
"But there are still those days
When the Record plays just so.
For when you hit the Play,
And lay down by my side and hum,
My search for harmony ends."
that stanza was perfect. This is just such a relatable piece because everybody has that "right" song. It's light and it flows really well, I'm impressed. Hope to see more from you soon!
Krystal
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Re: Hit the Play
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:07:36 PM AEST
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well, ive been stuck loving the numa numa song for a while now lol, but i know what you mean, music is something we key into for true soul happiness i believe, such a beautiful poem youve shared, and i love how you ended it, may you always have harmony in your heart my friend:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 18th October 2007 @ 01:27:57 PM AEST
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Very well written. I am speechless.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by brew on
Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 02:01:09 PM AEST
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WEll palying a tune in the mind, can be wonderful........great write Marc........Just set the tune
Hugs
brew~ |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th March 2008 @ 01:04:38 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Really got the message across |
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Re: Hit the Play
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by a7x36 on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 04:01:06 PM AEST
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music rules and it's the most inspirational form of art because it combines writing with sound.
play that record till it plays no more
(and listen to Against Me!) |
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