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Me and only me
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:15:06 PM in AEST
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My shield is up against forces greater than my own.
My front is the only visible wall of my overly complex soul and personality.
Although happy in person, my true soul is confined within a solitary body.
Do you know me?
Of course not.
I am me, and no one knows that person.
In privacy, my mind, body, and soul cry like gushing blood onto anything and everything willing to absorb.
My issues are not with myself, but my inability to trust and love.
My soul is lost within its own maze.
Grief overwhelms me, like a cascade of the epitomy of evil.
I am everything all at once without even trying.
Oh how I wish to show others.
Oh, how I long to relieve my pain without physical pain.
What to do, what to do?
Should I jump off the ledge of my sanity, life, and my everything or take a step back and review my life for the grotesque being it is?
Clashing emotions are all that I know.
Without them, I am pathetic, lonely, but most importantly scared and fragile.
Will I ever be loved?
Suddenly, jumping off a proverbial ledge sounds like a great choice...
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Re: Me and only me
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by chulysnacky on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:20:18 PM AEST
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I like your poem, but I don't like the meaning of it because killing yourself isn't going to solve anything and if you think it will than that's pathetic...
Everyone in life has a place somewhere and your right I don't know you, but there is one person that does and that's you, so only you can make yourself happy because only you know what lies in your heart, your feelings... Happiness lies within yourself so try to find it! |
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Re: Me and only me
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by blissful-ignorance on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 10:40:08 AM AEST
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nice poem. heavyhearted but, good. besides, writing poetry is a way to express how you feel, not necessarily what you will do. in any case however, dont kill yourself. and im sure you are loved, by your friends, by your family. well im off to read more poems, ttyl
taylor
oh bye the way, what does proverbial mean? nvm ill look it up...
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Re: Me and only me
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by priss on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:57:11 AM AEST
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nicely done again, my love. i'm sure it hurt mucho when you were writing this, but i bet you felt soooo much better once you did. i'm going through your old stuff, liking what i see.
~aunt priss |
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