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You're feeding me with poetry
Contributed by
CalamityAna
on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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For bread I have no hunger
For wine my lips are dry
For play I have no energy,
I sit, and sit, and sigh.
You're feeding me with poetry,
You're sustaining me with life,
You're mocking me with eloquence,
You're making light of strife.
For bread I have no hunger.
For wine my lips are dry.
For play I have no energy,
I sit, and sit, and sigh.
While you question theories all day long,
And with me contemplate,
Why some men must love with passions deep,
While some know only hate.
For games I have no wit,
And for love I am too late,
The only thing I wish to do,
Is sit with you and wait.
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CalamityAna
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2006-06-27 19:13:06]
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Re: You're feeding me with poetry
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by moses on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:31:32 PM AEST
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loved it! especially I liked the first two stanzas they just perfectly fit together. You're right you did roll all of those elements all in it.
Well done, keep up the good work!
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Re: You're feeding me with poetry
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:25:04 AM AEST
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| I loved this very much. It flows along so well, and has a message to tell. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Sue x |
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