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Emotions
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:49:31 PM in AEST
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Even though my emotions come in waves as frequently as the tides, I remember to remain at peace just as the seas when tranquil.
My most occurring emotion is anger, breaking loose like a demon escaping the fiery pits of hell, yet I continuously try to supress it.
Sadness and depression envelope me like a raging sea, making me feel as if I will drown in all of its grotesqueness, despite my knowing that I will perservere and survive.
Happiness to me is not rare and is the best emotion I've ever known, like butterflies fluttering in the depths of my soul, fighting to thrive.
But eventually, all emotions will cease to exist and new ones will arrive...
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Re: Emotions
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:25:23 PM AEST
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Well for your first poem this is very good.
Alot of deep emotion in this write
well done |
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Re: Emotions
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by moses on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:34:04 PM AEST
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Good write, well done, crammed with emotion.
Consider breaking your poems into stanzas,
like I'm doing.
Poetry is an amazing thing, and welcome to the website.
Keep up the good work,
-moses |
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Re: Emotions
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by chaos78 on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:23:21 PM AEST
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| I agree with the vampire good write |
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