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Anti-Epoch
Contributed by
Jeff9Man
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:04:16 PM in AEST
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The world is a vast and hungry place
Fear
It’s so easy to get lost, be forgotten
No breath
So many casualties, self inflicted victims
Gasp
This isn’t right, I was to be great, to succeed
Jump
A dead end on a no name street. What happened?
Fall
I had dreams, how could it end up so wrong?
End
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2006-06-27 13:04:16]
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Re: Anti-Epoch
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by Surfpup on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:34:25 PM AEST
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This is a very interesting poem... I don't really understand the meaning of it though.
Anyway, I can say that everyone has dreams, and not everyone's dreams come true.
The world is indeed a vast and hungry place, and we have to work hard to find our place in it.
This is a good poem. Keep on writing! |
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Re: Anti-Epoch
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:39:43 PM AEST
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we all have our ups and downs
i guess its the way of life
you will have to be stronge
anyways good write |
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