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Oh Violin
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
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Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:45:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The music plays by candle light,
its whispers make me cry.
Sweet soft sounds waft through the air,
and make my poor heart sigh.
Oh violin your strings caressed
and touched with the masters hand.
Your serenade it speaks to me,
from heavens golden strand.
Like winds that whisper through the woods,
the trees all seem to sing.
With tenderness my soul is touched,
with love from gifted string.
Like a waltz the bow it glides,
its sounds that seem to weep.
They play my heart with romance,
each cord they seem to sweep.
Please take flight oh violin,
and play your lovers songs.
And bring her back to my arms,
here where she belongs.
Copyright ©
Gentlemanpoet
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2006-06-27 12:45:26]
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Re: Oh Violin
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:53:13 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful. So well written, you are a master of words. Sue x |
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Re: Oh Violin
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:56:04 PM AEST
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Oh *sigh*
I'm a hard core country gal and you have me swooning at my keyboard! I think I could read your poems all day long..............
Thank you so much for sharing your work.
Jennifer |
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Re: Oh Violin
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:03:30 PM AEST
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| Your soothing words made me take a deep breath, pause for a moment, and simply say .."Wow, I felt that." Very calming....and yes, gentle. |
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Re: Oh Violin
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by Jeff9Man on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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| Certainly a moving piece. You captured music with words well. Impressive. |
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Re: Oh Violin
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by CalamityAna on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:26:24 PM AEST
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| stunning....absolutly stunning. i love the imagery of the violin. |
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Re: Oh Violin
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 11:30:10 AM AEST
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| Way to make the violin tie in with a former love. It adds on to the mystery and beauty of the violin. |
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