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Forever my Darkness
Contributed by
deadclown
on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Inside my world of darkness
I feel every emotion born in my grief
I try to touch it
To take it out
and replace it with something more beautiful
I want Something I can give to others
Something that would in return
make me smile
Knowing I was responsible
for giving an abused situation some hope
I try this each day
I really do
I try
but my unforgiving darkness
takes over each time
I don't want pity
I don't want pretentious concern
or prayers that belong to the good
All these things
I do not need
This is not why I chose to write these words
By doing this
I am asking for nothing
nothing
I don't mind if I recieve no emotion
from those that decide to read my grief
I don't mind if no comments
are placed below my frustration
These things I do not mind
This is how I feel
To you I am a stranger
so there's no need for compassion
You may feel nothing for these words
You may have your own darkness
or you may share the same darkness as me
If this is so
I will not pity you
for this is not what you need
All these things I say
belong to me
I never really wanted them
but they are there
and they always will be
This is me
This is who I am
This is how I feel
Copyright ©
deadclown
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2006-06-26 17:57:41]
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 06:02:54 PM AEST
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| for the first time i can say WHOA i really lied this so much emotion and great flow i think you are really good |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:28:18 PM AEST
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very powerful write man, full of deep dark emotion. I can feel where you're coming from.
nice write, keep em coming.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by chaos78 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:53:40 PM AEST
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| i know the feeling this is a good write u got a lot out |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 02:31:43 AM AEST
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| Your emotions flow really well. No need for pity, for you have opened your heart in this poem. Poetry I feel is the gateway to an inquisitive mind, and you have let us share yours. Thank you. Sue x |
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST
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Fully understood.
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Re: Forever my Darkness
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by LifeFadingAway on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:30:00 AM AEST
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Great write, you really put your emotioins in it
I know the feeling, know what you mean |
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