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Invisible
Contributed by
lilmom101
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 03:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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what colors the world?
who colors the world
the world is a painting
is has no flaw
the rain revives all the color
if rain were a color
beauty is what we would see
God be an artist
earth his masterpiece
a leaf so vivid in life
a bug adds even more effect
in this picture his love is dignified
so many thoughts yet no way to put them together any suggestions
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2006-06-26 15:36:30]
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Re: Invisible
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by Lucid_Tides on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 04:56:23 PM AEST
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| This write is very spiritual and earthly. I really like spirituality. Earth is a beautiful place, and without the rain, it would end. A good definition of life. |
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Re: Invisible
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:30:49 AM AEST
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I think you did a fine job putting these thoughts together. Beautiful thoughts they are as well.
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Re: Invisible
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:41:02 PM AEST
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Your poem reminded me of the masterpiece of butterflies. Such perfection. So too your poem was perfect. Put your basic thoughts down 'n' just like God does Nature, paint a word picture around them. Shazzaaam! Ya got a poem. New to YPDC? Welcome
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KenMoore
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