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Thank You Again
Contributed by
packatack
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:49:04 PM in AEST
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ChristianPoetry
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Lord thanks to you I'm alive and well today
Without you I could not live another day happily
But with you I know life is more precious when you lead the way
Day to day our world revolves but in your eyes its a brand new day
Its like a new start with Heaven's angels singing and praying
Thanks again Lord for all the things you done for me
Because with you O mighty one
My life will not live on day to day till we meet in eternity
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Re: Thank You Again
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by wrdz on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 09:38:24 PM AEST
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| Only one error I could see. Line seven, last word. Refering to God in any other way other than "God", you need to capitalize that reference word re: Him, He, One, Lord, etc. Good work on this piece. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Thank You Again
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by lilmom101 on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:14:27 AM AEST
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| nice peaceful piece |
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