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Why Daddy Why?
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Daddy don’t hurt me
Was the child’s cry
Daddy don’t you love me
Why Daddy Why?
What did I do?
Was I really that bad?
Daddy don’t kick me
Why are you so mad?
I cleaned my room
And made my bed
I ate my dinner
With nothing said
I helped my brother
Go to bed
Why Daddy Why?
Are you hitting my head
You sat in front
Of the TV watching the game
Every once in awhile
To get you a beer you’d call my name
I did what you asked
Quiet as a mouse
Now you are dragging me
All over the house
Why Daddy Why?
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NoSaint
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2006-06-26 13:07:15]
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by Lilbabe on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:16:41 PM AEST
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| such a sad poem...wonderfully written, though. |
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:26:35 PM AEST
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| This makes me so sad,Can actually visualise this childs pleading eyes. Sue x |
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by Winterland on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:39:51 PM AEST
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The saddest part of this poem is that it is true for so many children around the world. You did a wonderful job of capturing the entire scene, the child's life, pain and emotions. Tremendous!
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by OzChick on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 07:36:41 PM AEST
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Great poem! I'm sad to say it reminded me of my own childhood when I used to cry the same words. You've captured the feeling well with your perspective. Thank you for sharing this one.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by wrdz on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 07:52:23 PM AEST
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| A question no child should EVER have to ask. Sad, but true for some children. Well done to you for your efforts here. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:03:23 AM AEST
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wow that brought tears to my eyes.
what a sad sad piece .sadly its like that all over the world.And sometimes when i see on the news or see that happens to children i feel like i just wanna kill those bastards.
excuse me for saying that .I have 3 children of my own and if anyone dare lay a hand on them i would kill them.anyways excuse my blabbering.
you take care now
and great write
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Re: Why Daddy Why?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 02:47:13 PM AEST
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You have a knack, Shari, of masterfully capturing the pain of the "God, I wish it wasn't sos" in life. Vivid with simplicity. This was simply magnificent in getting across the emotional destruction of an innocent child. Kudos
wabl
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