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Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
Contributed by
Lucid_Tides
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Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:07:04 PM in AEST
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Shine down valiant eyes
It's time for your divine uprise
You will stand alone
And strong knowing nothing
Will destroy your dignity
So let victory free the fetter
And put no trust
Into the world around you
Because when the time comes
You'll have to depend on yourself
So shine down brave mind
You're a soldier of a brutal kind
Your destination will follow
In the near footsteps to paradise
Utopia of the splendoured
Where you will rest your mind
Knowing nothing will step in your path
For freedom and youth
Keep walking forward audacious soul
In this perpetual parade
Of love and hate
Where you stand not enemy nor friend
But the mediator of time
Neverceasing for the fallen
And overcomming the loss of love
Die in paradise, my infernal side
Die with the cares of nothing
And the world will surrendor
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:42:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write..very impressive.
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 02:01:24 PM AEST
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Very impressive is right
another great piece of writing |
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
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by lilmom101 on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 04:48:53 PM AEST
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| i like your poem so many nice words to describe all the things you talk about |
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:48:32 PM AEST
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Your writes are amazing. Most impressive and brilliantly penned every time. The more and more I read ur poems the more I get drawn in. You are very gifted and talented. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 08:00:47 PM AEST
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Very wonderful poem, it is done.. just waiting for Him to come get us..takes time for us from no time at all..
RaquelLeah |
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