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Freak
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Denied within, an unknown sin
Unlock the pain that’s deep within
Hypnotized by a baby’s cries
I found the key to my childhood’s lies
Who leads you to the dark secret?
Your life will end, and your scars won’t mend
You can’t understand the message that pains sends
All is lost, innocence the cost
Your sanity’s what you miss most
Then you found the moment life did change
A date appears from long ago
Now the memories start to flow
Now I let it go
Who lead me to the dark secret?
Copyright ©
darkscorpio
... [
2003-02-08 23:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Freak
(User Rating: 1 ) by Icequeen on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 02:03:32 PM AEST (User
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Like it, good work and some interesting ideas aired. |
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Re: Freak
(User Rating: 1 ) by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 01:17:31 PM AEST (User
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that is a great poem. i liked the ryme scheme a lot. it really made me think a lot... |
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